Stephano's Mafia Christmas (For WR Contest)

It was the night before Christmas...(NO NO NO!) It was a dark and stormy night...(NO!)


It was a dark and stormy Christmas eve. And all throughout New York Shops were raising they're security because they knew...Stephano always strikes on Christmas eve...

Stephano checked his duffel bag. He had a few guns , some homemade explosives , and a can of spray paint. " Back in the day we used to have Tommy guns" he thought. He bitterly remembered the day the cops razed the old abandoned lot. "The Lions Den..." he said out loud to no one imparticular. "Pity my Tommy was in there when it burned". A man in a dirty trench coat walked down the alley torwards him. "You leaving Stephano?"the man said. "What do you want Alfonzo?" "Im just here here to tell you that Macy's really beefed up it's security. "You wont be able to break in this time". Stephano smirked. "They could guard the thing with rocket launchers for all I care." "I ALWAYS get the goods on Christmas Eve".





(How you guys like it? More to come.)

WOW! what a story.

I loved it! I'm looking foward to the others.



~Sapphire~

Sounds like a mystery or something. It's good.
Officer David Harley

You may have met Stephano but there is still one more character involved in this little mish-mash of Christmas fun...


"Come on Linda we have to get out of this place before it closes or we'l be locked in for the night." "But mommy I left my doll near the toy section." "Well thats too bad". Linda and her mom walked torwards the cash register. "Well your just in time. Cash or Credit?" "Credit. Heres my PIN." "Thank You and have A Merry Christmas. Now it's time I lock this place up." Walking torwards her car Linda's mom said "Im sorry about your doll but Im sure Santa will bring you a new one." "Linda?" Silence. "Linda!?" ... "LINDA!!!!!"


Stephano jumped through the hole his explosive has made in the wall. He saw the two unconscious guards with stun guns on the floor. "Pathetic." he said and began placing items in his duffel bag.

No Not Linda... she went back to get her doll didn't she?
Officer David Harley

You'l find out tommorow. I plan to post a part each night.

If you posted that yesterday then today is tomorrow and tomorrow is today so shouldn't you post another part today.
Officer David Harley

This story is on hold-Nate Maxwell

Its okay.

Officer David Harley

good story so far, cant wait to hear more

Yeah... when are you posting another installment?

Officer David Harley

i think im about o burst from aticipation...was really thinking about repeating officer david harleys q, but am not going repeat the already asked......What happened to linda?

Is she going to dye?
Officer David Harley

or is she gonna stow away with the robber dude?

"There you are FillyWinkers!"

Stehano glanced around . He swore he had heard someone just seconds ago. "Just my imagination" he muttered with a chuckle.
Then he heard the footsteps. He pulled out his gun and aimed in the direction of the footsteps.

"Hi mister."


Stephano couldnt believe his eyes. "It was just a little girl" he thought. "I cant take her as a hostage...And I'm not a murderer."


"Mister can you help me find my mommy?"


Stephano blinked. "If I help her I'l be turning myself in..."


Linda began to cry.


"All Right..."

so i guess theres some good in everyone

but... something happens. don't you know the plot structure of a mystery Wooton told it in "The Other Side Of The Glass.
Officer David Harley

I can't wait for more of the story!



~Sapphire~

neither can i, you are a really good story writer nate