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AIO Fan Fiction (for Winter Story Contest)

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AIO Fan Fiction (for Winter Story Contest)

Post by Jason on 20th December 2009, 2:58 pm

(No Title As of right now)

Part 1

His pace slowed as he pressed on.The wind blew in his face and the snow coming down harder and harder. His car had broken down a couple miles back, and had been walking for almost a half hour. He was keeping warm for the most part but the cold was steadily getting to him. Then he saw a sign that said "Odyssey 3" "Good" he thought, "Im closer than i thought."He kept walking, hugging the very edge of the road because the snow was starting to get deeper. He was getting weaker and weaker. Then he just didnt have the strength to keep himself up and fell to the ground. He hoped that someone would see him and stop to help. "This could be my last day", he thought, "the last chapter of ......" then he passed out on the side of the road as a couple cars passed by not bothering to stop.


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Re: AIO Fan Fiction (for Winter Story Contest)

Post by Rose on 21st December 2009, 7:40 am

Wow! Great story! I can't wait to here more parts to it! Very Happy Is this for the Winter Story Contest?



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Re: AIO Fan Fiction (for Winter Story Contest)

Post by Marvin DeSanchez on 21st December 2009, 8:17 am

What is this, do we write the next paragraph or what?

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Re: AIO Fan Fiction (for Winter Story Contest)

Post by Guest on 21st December 2009, 8:55 am

no. its a contest were you write a story and at the end of winter it gets judged.
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Re: AIO Fan Fiction (for Winter Story Contest)

Post by Rose on 21st December 2009, 12:58 pm

Here is the link if you would like to join the contest! Very Happy
http://www.campbellcountymb.com/old-west-fun-world-f5/the-winter-story-contest-t51.htm



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Post by Guest on 21st December 2009, 3:39 pm

I was trying to find the link but I couldn't...

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Post by Jason on 21st December 2009, 5:01 pm

Part 2

*Meanwhile at Whits End

"You wanted me, Whit?" Asked Connie as she walked into the basement workshop.
"Yeah, is Nick here yet?" he asked

"Yeah he just got here."

"Good, I need you to run to the Connellsville shop, I ordered a part for this new invention I've been working on and it was shipped there by mistake."

"A new Invention? so thats what you've been up to"

""Yes Connie, Nick can take over the counter, while you're out, and this way I can keep working."

"Sure thing Whit" With that she headed out the back door and into her car.

She drove for a little bit and then"I wonder whats on the radio"she thought as she flipped through the stations, "ugh I can never get anything good out of Odyssey"
After going a couple miles she noticed something on the side of the road.
"Probably just an animal"
But as she got closer it looked less and less like an animal and more and more like "Ah its a person." she screamed in panic, as she stepped hard on the break and pulled over to the side of the road nearly sliding into the ditch. She got out and checked to see if he was breathing. He was, but he was unconscious. Connie got back into her car, grabbed her cell, and dialed 911.

"Hi, Yeah Theres a man on the side of the road" ...

"If he was walking would I be talking to you, he's lieing on the side of the road unconscious, Just send an ambulance and please hurry"...

"Where am I? oh right. Im on the road from Odyssey to Connelsville,just look for a car that looks like this" then she described her car. "please Hurry!!!"

After the ambulance arrived and took the man away, she couldn't help but feel that she had seen that man somewhere before. She wasnt sure how or why but he seemed really familiar. So she called whit told him everything that had happened and that she was going to the hospital. Whit said he understood and would get his package some other way. Connie proceeded to the Hospital.


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Post by Guest on 22nd December 2009, 6:41 am

DaDaDaaaaaaaaaa(dramatic music) It was good.
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Re: AIO Fan Fiction (for Winter Story Contest)

Post by Rose on 22nd December 2009, 7:23 am

Very good! Keep writing! Very Happy



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Re: AIO Fan Fiction (for Winter Story Contest)

Post by Jason on 22nd December 2009, 11:17 am

glad you guys like it so far, more is coming hopefully tonight Very Happy

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Post by Marvin DeSanchez on 22nd December 2009, 12:17 pm

I love this story! It's suspenseful.

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Post by Guest on 22nd December 2009, 2:30 pm

Yeah! more!
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Post by Jason on 22nd December 2009, 3:20 pm

Part 3

Meanwhile at Whitsend

"Thats all right Connie, I understand, dont worry about it, it sounds like you've got other things on your hands. You do what you have to do...all right, I'll see you later bye."and with that Whit hung up the phone

"What was that all about?" asked Nick Mulligan

"Well it seems Connie found someone on the side of the road unconscious, and the funny thing is she thinks he looks familiar."

"It seems she may have a mystery on her hands."



"You and I both know that mysteries swarm Odyssey like stray cats swarm a can of tuna." said a voice coming from under a table.

"Hi Bernard,"said Whit

"I wonder who this mystery man is?" asked Nick.

"Well Thats what Connie is hoping to find out." replied Whit.




It bothered Connie all the way to the hospital. Who was this mysterious
stranger and why did he look so familiar? "Who could it be who...."she thought, as she finally pulled into the hospital.

"Maybe now I can get some answers." she thought to herself, and entered the hospital. She walked up to the counter and asked the receptionist about the man that had been brought in a few minutes ago.
She told her that they didnt have a name because he wasnt carrying any I.D. She told her she could visit him when he woke up.
So she went in the waiting room. It was only about ten minutes later when a nurse came up to her and told her the man was awake.

So she was lead into the mans room. As she walked in the man recognized her almost right away.

"Connie?" he asked

"Yes thats me, but im not sure I remember you."

"Connie, I guess it has been awhile, would it help if I looked for bugs in the napkin holder, or little camera in book?" he replied

"Jared?"

"Yup its good to see you again Connie."


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Post by Bren on 22nd December 2009, 3:39 pm

Ok, I don't know where you are taking this but I need the next part very soon.

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Post by Jason on 22nd December 2009, 4:15 pm

Im working on it, but i dont hink i'll be able to post anymore till next week....after i get back.....unless i get enough of it done to post more of it later..

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Post by Guest on 23rd December 2009, 11:06 am

I thought it was Mitch until Connie said Jared.

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Post by Bren on 23rd December 2009, 11:08 am

I thought the same thing.

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Re: AIO Fan Fiction (for Winter Story Contest)

Post by Jason on 28th December 2009, 5:09 pm

Part 4


When Connie left the hospital, she had more questions then when she went in. She now knew that the mystery man was Jared, but what kinda case would lead him to Odyssey? Connie knew that Jared was with the FBI so something was obviously going on. She also knew that since he was involved with the FBI there wasn't a whole lot he could tell her and he said as much. Why does there have to be so many secrets, she thought. As she walked into Whitsend, she saw an unexpected person sitting by the counter. It was Mitch. She almost wanted to flee before he saw her but it was too late
"Hi Connie" he said
Connie walked to him and said hello.

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Post by Guest on 28th December 2009, 5:11 pm

what Mitch is alive and in Odyssey?
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Post by Bren on 28th December 2009, 6:30 pm

Oh boy. I am really interested now.

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